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Fight

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Mountain terrain - plateau - mountain visible in background
couple sparring - precise fighting
he wields a spear
she fights barehanded

armies amass - orders are given

couple stop
"They come." -she says
"So be it." -his answer

face off - couple vs the masses
brief fight scene - army getting thrashed, couple are seperate

scream~
he clicks his fingers - time stops
he walks to her
she has a runed arrow through her arm
he clenches his fist around his spear
time flows again
his spear shatters
he looks up, hes eyes a gaze of rage
bronze dragon wings burst tear hs shirt to pieces
she looks worried - eyes wide

-cut to black-

land is desolate, destroyed, scorched - distant mountains have creaters
he is holding her
"Are you alright?" - she raises eyebrow
"That was completely unnecessary." - with a small smile
"No one has even scratched us before."
'We must go."
he nods
he stands, his shirt mends itself, tatters float back into the whole
she snaps the arrow out
her hand pauses over the wound and glows faintly
when her hand moves away the skin is clear of blood
they turn and begin running
The opening scene for one of my ideas.

It's not really writing, it's missing a fair amount of grammar for that. It's more of a script, but I lack the animation skills for that.

Here we meet the two main characters in the story, the bronze dragon, and the panther.
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